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제목 Pet 등록일 2014-10-20
내용 Actually, I didn't have a chance to raise a pet.
I mean, except for the birds in cage, that the things walk in four foots.
I like small pets like a dog or a cat, but I am a little bit scared about the bigger one sized like a half of adult. because I got a bite from my friend's dog.
Anyway, I think that it's very difficult to raise something.
you have to feed them, and you have to wash them, and you have to bring them to hospital, and you have to pass them away.
I remember that I pestered my parents for adopting a pet when I was a child.
but my mom didn't allow me at that time.
Although Now I became at the status of deciding this issue, I am not raising something.
I choosed clean house without the hair of animals.
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2014-10-21
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Actually, I didn't have NEVER HAD a chance to raise a pet, I mean, except for the birds in cage WHEN I WAS LIVING AT HOME WITH MY PARENTS. that the things walk in four foots. EVEN TOUGH I like small pets like a dog or a cat, but I am a little bit scared about the LARGER SIZED ONES, MAINLY  bigger one sized like a half of adult. because I got a bite BITTEN BY from my friend's dog. Anyway, I think that it's very difficult to raise something. you have to feed them, and you have to wash them, and you have to bring them to hospital, and you have to pass them away. I remember that I pestered my parents for adopting a pet when I was a child. but my mom didn't allow me at that time. Although Now I became at the status of deciding this issue, I am not raising something. I choosed clean house without the hair of animals.

 

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