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| 제목 | whether | 등록일 | 2014-10-20 |
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| 내용 | Today, It's been rainning all day and It's hazy and foggy a little bit. so, people are walking around with umbrellas in colorful.I don't lik rainning cause, we can't hang around while rainning and it feels like dark and gloomy. so, i hope that we can see deep blue sky as rich as blue ocean ater rainning. And i feel the seasong is changing, nowdays. it meaans the winter is coming soon. The seasons usually change ater bout of rainning seasong. |
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| 담당강사 | Christine1 | 등록일 | 2014-10-21 |
| 첨삭 내용 | It has been rainning all day and It's a little hazy and foggy; therefore, people are walking around with colorful umbrellas.I don't like when it rains because we can't hang out when it's rainning; sometimes it feels dark and gloomy. I hope that we can see the deep blue sky and rich blue ocean when it stops rainning. It feels like the season is changing, it seems like winter is coming soon. The seasons usually changes after the rainy season. |
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