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제목 About my Company 등록일 2014-10-20
내용 I have been working for Samsung SDS which is a IT service leading Company in korea.
Samsung SDS was launched in 1985.

We offers a diverse array of services such as IT Consulting, System Development, System operation
and IT infrastructure services.

Our headquaters are located in Seoul
and There are many branches overseas.

In these days, my company is trying to expand our business to Global market
sometimes, I have a chance working with foreign employees. so, I try to learn English to work with global customers and partners

We have many business experiecnes accumulated from working with
major enterprises and public organizations, domestically and internationally.

There are more than ten thousand employees working in my company.
I think that the most important assets are vast business experiences,
accumulated knowledge and professional experts.
Overall I enjoy working at SAMSUNG SDS very much.
i believe my company is promising.
담당강사 Powell2 등록일 2014-10-24
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Hi, Your corrections are below in red. Good job :)

Your English instructor, Fon 

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I have been working for Samsung SDS, which is an IT service leading C company in k Korea. Samsung SDS was launched in 1985. We offers a diverse array of services such as IT Consulting, System Development, System operation and IT infrastructure services. Our headquaters are located in Seoul and T there are many branches overseas. In these days Currently, my company is trying to expand our business to Global markets. Sometimes, I have a chance to work working with foreign employees. s So, I try to learn English to work with global customers and partners. We have many much business experience experiecnes accumulated from working with major enterprises and public organizations, domestically and internationally. There are more than ten thousand employees working in my company. I think that the most important assets are vast business experiences, accumulated knowledge and professional experts. Overall I enjoy working at SAMSUNG SDS very much. i believe my company is promising.

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