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| 제목 | My homework!! | 등록일 | 2014-10-21 |
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| 내용 | Dear. Teacher J. You said that I must do homework!! first, Here is - polish : I make my son polish my new shoes. - willfully : willfully, I'm late for appointment with her. - stealing : at 1910, japan is to take away the land of my contry. clearly, that is stealing!! - goof : it's my mistake! maybe, I am goof! I thank for your comments about my grammer! I will try to reading a english books!! thank!! |
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| 담당강사 | Jae | 등록일 | 2014-10-21 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Dear. Teacher J. You said that I must do homework!! first, Here is - polish : I make my son polish my new shoes. - willfully : willfully, I'm late for appointment with her. *Willful (adjective) : refusing to change your ideas or opinions or to stop doing something
: done deliberately : INTENTIONAL
- willfullyadverb
- stealing : at 1910, japan is to take away the land of my contry. clearly, that is stealing!! Correction: In 1910, Japan took away the land of my country. Clearly, that is stealing! - goof : it's my mistake! maybe, I am goof! I thank for your comments about my grammer! Correction: Thank you for your comments and corrections about my grammar. I will try to reading a english books!! thank!! Correction: I will try to read English books. Thanks! :) MESSAGE: Hi Shawn, Thank you so much for doing your homework. :) I can see your dedication and enthusiasm to learn more. That's great! I'm sorry that we haven't finished our conversation because we were running out of time. I am always looking forward to more chances to talk with you. Have a wonderful Tuesday! See you next class! ^_^ Take care, |
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