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제목 Concerts 등록일 2014-10-22
내용 I could go the concerts anyone including my friends, my boy friend and also my family members.
But after I have went out with my boy friend, I can't go to concerts with my friends,
because when I see couples by alone, I feel jealous to them and angry at that situation.
And when I have a chance to go concert, I always prefer to sit right infront of the stage.
Which is the standing stage.
Because standing stage is more exciting to enjoy the show. I can see my favorite singer more closer than others and also can take pictures of them.
However, It is really difficult to reserve the standing stage, I have to open lots of browser to prevent from went down of server when it is overwhelmed by a rush of hits.
As a matter of fact I ask to my friends to reserve together at one time.
After this kind of my effort I could reserve the concert ticket that I want to sit.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-10-23
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I could go the TO concerts WITH anyone including my friends, my boy friend and SOMETIME also my family members. [But after I have went out with my boy friend, I can't go to concerts with my friends, because when I see couples by alone, I feel jealous to them and angry at that situation]. And when I have a chance to go concert, I always prefer to sit right infront of the stage, which is the standing stage, because standing stage is more exciting to enjoy the show. THERE, I can see my favorite singer more closer than others and also can take pictures of them. However, It is really difficult to reserve the standing stage, I have to open lots of browser to prevent THEM from went GOING down of ON THE server when it is overwhelmed by a rush of hits. As a matter of fact I ask to my friends to reserve TICKETS together at one time. After this kind of my effort I could reserve the concert ticket that  FOR WHERE I want to sit.

 

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