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제목 Project 등록일 2014-10-24
내용 I remember the project in UK when I was a junior in this company.
Actually, the reason why the project remains in my mind is that it was not the project itself, it was my first business trip abroad and it was not so romantic.
I work from 8 to 24, and I had a trouble with my senior.
He was so inflexible and he gave me works that I could not win through due to my lack of training.
Anyway, I and my colleagues went out the beautiful places near our accommodation on weekends.
And I knew that there's a park owned by National Trust which is a something like a Green Peace
who protect nature.
Now, Time in UK has left as memories.
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2014-10-28
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I remember the A project THAT I UNDERTOOK in THE UK when I was a junior in this company. Actually, The reason why the project remains in my mind is that it was not the project itself, it was my first business trip abroad; THOUGH and it was not so romantic. I workED from 8 to 24, and I had a trouble with my senior. He was so inflexible, AS and he gave me LOADS OF works that I could not win through CARRY OUT EFFECTIVELY ON ACCOUNT due to OF my lack of training. Anyway, I and my colleagues TOOK THE OPPORTUNITY TO VIEW SOME OF the beautiful places CLOSE BY OVER  near our accommodation on   weekends. And RECALL THAT there's WAS a park owned by National Trust; which is a something like a Green Peace (who WHICH protectS nature. Now, Time in UK has left as memories.  THAT WAS A VERY MEMORABLE OCCASION FOR ME IN THE UK!

 

 

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