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제목 Unit 16 - Hobbies / Mobile,Video Game 등록일 2014-10-27
내용 I played computer game very much when I was a student. I always went to game room with my friends. At that time, I don't have a concrete object for my future. So, I addicted to games. Now, since I'm working in a company, I don't have enough time to play games on weekdays. I usually play computer game on weekend for 4~5 hours. That's why I don't have a girlfriend. I like girls, but my background is very hard to meet girls, so I have to try to meet grils. But I don't try. It's a problem for me. I play a computer game only, not a console. I don't have a console machine such as XBOX and PlayStation. If I buy a console, I will play with that too many times. Therefore, I will never buy that.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-10-27
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I played computer gameS very much when I was a student. I always went to game roomS with my friends. At that time, I don't DIDN'T have a concrete objectIVE for my future, so, I WAS addicted to games. Now, since I'm working FULL TIME in a company, I don't have enough time to play games on weekdays, BUT I DO I usually play computer gameS on weekendS for 4~5 hours. That's why I don't have a girlfriend. I like girls, but my background CURRENT LIFESTYLE MAKES IT DIFFICULT is very hard to meet THEM. girls, so I have to try to meet grils. But I FEEL THAT I NEED TO I don't try . It's a problem for me. I play a computer game only, not a console. I don't have a console machine such as XBOX and PlayStation. If I buy a console, I will play with that too many times. Therefore, I will never buy that.

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