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| 제목 | self introduction | 등록일 | 2014-03-04 |
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| 내용 | Hello, my name is JunBeom Park and my English name is Noel that means Christmas. I chose it as my English name because my birthday is the same day as Christmas. I was born on December, 25th, 1981. I am in my early 30s. And I am a single. I have been working for SAMSUNG SDS for 6 years since 2008 as a programmer. My job is developing a web solution and it needs a lot of technologies. So I should read a lot of books related with technologies and apply it to my job. I work sitting on my chair all day but it is very exciting. In my free time, I learn playing a violin and read a book. sometimes I watch a movie at home or theater alone. I'm introvertied and thoughtful. That's it. If you have a question, feel free to ask me! |
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| 담당강사 | Faith2 | 등록일 | 2014-03-05 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello, my name is JunBeom Park and my English name is Noel that means Christmas. I chose it as my English name because my birthday is on the same day as Christmas. I was born on December 25th, 1981. I am in my early 30s. And I am single. I have been working for SAMSUNG SDS for 6 years since 2008 as a programmer. My job is developing a web solution and it needs a lot of technologies so, I should read a lot of books related to technologies and apply it to my job. I work sitting on my chair all day but it is very exciting. In my free time, I learn playing a violin and read a book. sometimes I watch a movie at home or in the theater alone. I'm am an introvert and thoughtful person. That's it. If you have a question, feel free to ask me! | ||