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제목 | Traveling In the country | 등록일 | 2014-10-29 |
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내용 | Nowadays, many koreans, especially young people like to go abroad for trip. But still there are so many beautiful places in Korea. At the start of this year, I went to travel with my family. Mungyeong Saejae was the top pick must go site in recent survey in korea. There was healthful hot spring and great and beautiful road named Mungyeong Saejae. Even Korea is very small country, our family visited this wonderful place for the first time. I knew that this road was walked by the people who were on national engagement test hundreds of years ago. If you visit korea, I want to bring you this place. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-10-30 |
첨삭 내용 | Nowadays, many koreans, especially young people like to go abroad for tripS DESPITE |