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| 제목 | "once in a lifetime" | 등록일 | 2014-11-06 |
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| 내용 | When i watched TV program "꽃보다 청춘", I really hope to visit South America once in a life time. In this program, casts visited Peru and show me the ancient herritage. I was overwhelmed with that exostic and unrealistic scene. |
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| 담당강사 | Charlanna2 | 등록일 | 2014-11-07 |
| 첨삭 내용 | When I watched the TV program "꽃보다 청춘", it really made me want to visit South America. I've never been to South America; I think it would be a once in a life time experience to be able to visit. In this program, the cast members visited Peru. Watching their trip to Peru exposed me to its ancient heritage. I was overwhelmed by the exotic scenery; it seemed unreal. |
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