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제목 Company 등록일 2014-11-08
내용 I work at an IT company called Samsung SDS which is a leading IT company in Korea.
It was established in 1980, there are 50 branches in Korea and we have overseas branches in China, America and Middle East.
There are more than 12,000 employees working for the company.
We provide our clients with various kinds of IT service including consulting, developing and maintaining software programs and systems, to make their business successful and efficient.
Our company’s secret to success is based on customized and ultimate IT service.
That’s why we are taking major market share in IT field.
I believe Samsung SDS will be the best IT Company, not only in Korea but also in the World in near future.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2014-11-09
첨삭 내용

I work at an IT company called Samsung SDS, which is a leading IT company in Korea. It was established in 1980.  There are 50 branches in Korea, AS WELL AS and we have overseas branches in China, America and THE Middle East. There are more than 12,000 employees working for the company. We provide our clients with various kinds of IT serviceS including consulting, developing, and maintaining software programs and systems, to WHICH HELP make their business successful and efficient. Our company’s secret to success is based on customized and ultimate IT service, that’s why we are taking major market share in THE IT field. I believe Samsung SDS will be the best IT Company, not only in Korea but also in the World in near future!

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***Very well written Rye ... we'll discuss it during our next class.  Teacher Wynston

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