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제목 | singing in a group | 등록일 | 2014-11-12 |
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내용 | Koreans have many excitement especially when they get together and share joyful things like a singing with karaoke. We call the store that services karaoke as karaoke room. I also usually enjoy going to karaoke room after drinking together. I am a person who boom up the atmosphere at the karaoke room by singing a song first with dance among colleagues. There are some people shy at the karaoke room, but I think that karaoke room exist not for singing good but for show themselves as they are. More become stupid, more become friendly. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-11-13 |
첨삭 내용 | Koreans have many VARIETIES OF excitement, especially when they get together and share joyful things SUCH AS l
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