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제목 | Tell me about your Project | 등록일 | 2014-11-14 |
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내용 | As a software developer, my job is to create a application of Android and iOS application Recently the company is developing mobile security solutions. I expect be able to experience a variety of this project. But also a very tight schedule is currently finishing well. I am very proud to be involved in a meaningful project. I hope my hard work will help the company. |
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담당강사 | Gail | 등록일 | 2014-11-17 |
첨삭 내용 | As a software developer, my job is to create a application of Android and iOS application. = good sentence Recently the company is developing mobile security solutions. = good sentence I expect be able to experience a variety of this project. I expect to have a variety of experience from this project. But also a very tight schedule is currently finishing well. Although the schedule is tight it is currently finishing well. I am very proud to be involved in a meaningful project. I hope my hard work will help the company. |