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제목 Tell me about your Project 등록일 2014-11-14
내용 As a software developer, my job is to create a application of Android and iOS application

Recently the company is developing mobile security solutions.

I expect be able to experience a variety of this project.

But also a very tight schedule is currently finishing well.

I am very proud to be involved in a meaningful project.

I hope my hard work will help the company.
담당강사 Gail 등록일 2014-11-17
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As a software developer, my job is to create a application of Android and iOS application. =  good sentence

Recently the company is developing mobile security solutions.  =  good sentence

I expect be able to experience a variety of this project.

I expect to have a variety of experience from this project.

But also a very tight schedule is currently finishing well.

Although the schedule is tight it is currently finishing well.

I am very proud to be involved in a meaningful project. I hope my hard work will help the company.

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