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제목 | Unit 9. Photography 2 | 등록일 | 2014-11-18 |
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내용 | When my wife and I went to honeymoon trip 18 years ago, we went to Italy. I bought my compact digital camera to take lots of pictures. But the problem was we couldn’t take a nice photo together. We had to ask someone to take a picture of us sometimes and it was a bit risky since Rome was notorious for pickpockets. One day, at a park, I asked a passerby to take a picture of us. He seemed a tourist like us. I handed him my camera after explaining how to handle it. And as I was going back to the spot where we wanted to take a shot. Suddenly the guys was running off with my camera. I was too stupefied to do anything that I couldn’t that I couldn’t even scream out for help. After that terrible event, I don’t ask a passerby to take a picture as possible. If I ask, I’d ask someone at the place where it’s difficult to run off. I learned my lesson. |
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담당강사 | Rebecca2 | 등록일 | 2014-11-20 |
첨삭 내용 | When my wife and I went on our honeymoon trip 18 years ago, we went to Italy. I brought my compact digital camera to take lots of pictures. But the problem was we couldn’t take a nice photo together. We had to ask someone to take a picture of us sometimes and it was a bit risky since Rome was notorious for pickpockets. One day, at a park, I asked a passerby to take a picture of us. He seemed to be a tourist like us. I handed him my camera, after explaining how to handle it. However, as I was going back to the spot where we wanted to take a shot, suddenly the guy ran off with my camera. I was so stupefied someone would actually do this that I couldn’t even scream out for help. After that terrible event, I never ask passersby to take a picture if at all possible. If I ask, I ask someone at a place where it’s difficult to run off. I learned my lesson. |