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My favorite food is pasta. -good!

I am pretty good at cooking and enjoy making it.

-> I am pretty good at cooking and I enjoy making it.

It is very easy to make but tastes so good. -good!

There are a few steps when cooking pasta.

-> There are a few steps when cooking pasta.

First, prepare some ingredients such as carrots, onions, potatoes, bacon, cream.

-> First, prepare some ingredients such as carrots, onions, potatoes, bacon,and cream.

First bring a large pot of salted water to a boil.

-> First Then, bring a large pot of salted water to a and boil it.

When the water starts to boil, cook the pasta. -good!

When it’s ready, drain the pasta and add it to the bacon and mix well. - great!

If you want it extra creamy, add more cream.

-> If you want it to become extra creamyier, add more cream.

Like I said, it’s easy to make and the taste is guaranteed. -good!

Over all, I hope that you have a chance to eat the pasta I made.

-> Over all, I hope that you  will have a chance to eat the pasta I made.

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I love reading this! I feel like I am reading a script from a commercial. You can be the next Korean Chef! ^_^ Well, I have been craving for pasta, especifically the white pasta, or carbonara. I really want to try the one you cooked. I will go and fly to Korea. Please wait for me. Hahahahahaha. Thanks for sharing!