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| 제목 | I had wonderful time with a girl that I like. | 등록일 | 2014-03-06 |
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| 내용 | Yesteday, I told you that I was going to meet a girl that I like. I met her last night. I just noticed her I will finish the work earier than usual, then she asked me to see a movie together. She reserved tickets and I bouht dinner for her. Actually, I am still waiting for her answer since I courted her. we are not couple yet. But she gave me a candle that she made by herself. I was so moved. Although, she didn't answer, I could have confidence that I am still having a chance to be her boyfriend. We watched the movie named "Non stop" starting Liam Neeson. It's too boring movie.. Don't see that movie especially with your lover. In that time, I tried to grep her hand during the movie and then I want her to be sure we are couple from now on. But, as you know the action type of movies.. even boring action movie.. I slept during the movie.. Next time, I will court her again with great event. |
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| 담당강사 | Claudia | 등록일 | 2014-03-06 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Yesteday, I told you that I was going to meet the girl that I like. I met her last night. I just told her I will finish the work earlier than the usual, then she asked me to see a movie together. She reserved tickets and I bought dinner for her. Actually, I am still waiting for her answer since I courted her. We are not couple yet. But she gave me a candle that she made by herself. I was so moved. Although, she didn't answer, I could have confidence that I am still having a chance to be her boyfriend. We watched the movie named "Non stop" staring Liam Neeson. It's too boring movie.. Don't see that movie especially with your lover. In that time, I tried to grip her hand during the movie and then I want her to be sure we are couple from now on. But, as you know the action type of movies.. even boring action movie.. I slept during the movie.. Next time, I will court her again with a great event. ******************************************************************************************************************* Ronaldo, You are such a funny guy. Use your sense of humor to court that girl. ^^, If you can make her laugh, then it's possible for you to make her fall in love with you. (",) I love Liam Neeson. I can't believe that you fell asleep during the movie. Haha! Well, let's talk more of that later. See you! Claudia | ||