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제목 | As for the affair | 등록일 | 2014-11-21 |
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내용 | Subject : As for the affair I know that American people can have an affair with the other partner without taking legal responsibility. Regarding set aside the immoral issue. In Korea, It is illegal that married men have a sex with another women. You said that men should be married with more than ten women because of the lack of women's population. But my biological opinion, it is natural that men want to have a sex with many women. Because women have only one egg, so they can adopt only one man, but men have billions of sperm, so they have the instinct to spread their seed to many fields. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2014-11-26 |
첨삭 내용 | Subject : As for the affair I know that American people can have an affair with the other partner without taking legal responsibility. Regarding set aside the immoral issue. In Korea, It is illegal that married men have a sex with another women. You said that men should be married with more than ten women because of the lack of women's population. But my biological opinion, it is natural that men want to have a sex with many women. Because women have only one egg, so they can adopt only one man, but men have billions of sperm, so they have the instinct to spread their seed to many fields. PERTAINING TO INFIDELITY, I AM AWARE THAT AMERICANS ARE NOT CULPABLE IN THE FACE OF THE LAW WHEN COMMITTING ADULTERY. IN KOREA ON THE OTHER HAND, IT IS ILLEGAL THAT MARRIED MEN HAVE INTERCOURSE WITH A WOMAN OTHER THAN HIS SPOUSE. BASED ON BIOLOGY, MY OPINION IS THAT IT IS NATURAL TO HAVE INTERCOURSE WITH WOMEN ... [I DON'T GET THE CONCEPT OF THE NEXT SENTENCE] ...
*** JUST TO CLARIFY MY STATEMENT YOU ALLUDED TO ABOUT 1 MAN TO 10 WOMEN: LET US SUPPOSE THAT THERE ARE 100 WOMEN AND 1000 WOMEN IN THE WORLD, AND THAT EACH WOMAN WANTS A MAN, AND DOES NOT WANT TO DO WITHOUT ONE. BUT ... THERE ARE ONLY 100 MEN! THEREFORE AFTER THE 100 HUNDRED MAN HAVE PAIRED WITH 100 WOMEN, THERE ARE 900 WOMEN WITHOUT A HUSBAND. IF THE 900 UNMARRIED WOMEN PURSUE THE 100 MARRIED MEN, THE OUTCOME IS ADULTERY. MY THEORY IS ... WOULD IT NOT BE PREFERABLE TO GIVE EACH MAN 10 WOMEN AS WIVES, INSTEAD OF ONE, AND IN DOING SO ... SAVE THE OTHER 900 WOMEN FROM BEING PROSTITUTES? THIS WAY, NO ONE GOES TO JAIL!!! |