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| 제목 | Unit 21 -Martial Art | 등록일 | 2014-11-26 |
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| 내용 | When I was child, I learned Taekwondo. At that time, there was a only one martial art academy, Taekwondo. In Korea, most people learn it when they was young. However, they forget it easily because they are not interested in it after they grow up. Martial Arts such as Taekwondo is not popular in Korea, so it is hard to see people that practice it in public area such as park. If I have a chance that I learn nartial art, I will learn it. The reason is I want to become more healthier. | ||
| 담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2014-11-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | When I was A child, I learned Taekwondo. At that time, there was a only one martial artS academy. |
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