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제목 Thanks Angel Teacher~~ 등록일 2014-11-27
내용 Thank you for your fascinating and joyful class.
I have been very happy despite that my eyes was almost closed ^^
On Friday morning, I must go for a business trip suddenly, so I can't respond your call.
I wonder we will study together next month, so I leave thanks message here.
Have a nice weekend, Angel Teacher~~
담당강사 Angel 등록일 2014-12-01
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Thank you for your fascinating and joyful class. I have been very happy despite that my eyes was almost closed ^^ On Friday morning, I must go for a business trip suddenly, so I can't respond your call. I wonder we will study together next month, so I leave thanks message here. Have a nice weekend, Angel Teacher~~

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Thank you for your fascinating and joyful class. I have been very happy. However, my eyes were almost closed. ^^ On Friday morning, I had an unexpected business trip, so I could not answer your call. I wonder if we will study together next month, so I leave a thank you message here. Have a nice weekend, Teacher Angel!

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Hi Mr. John, 

I am very glad to hear something from you. smiley I believe this is a personal message. Remember to send it to me on the message box. This space is for composition corrections. Anyway, regarding about your question the answer is "yes". yes We are having classes this month of December. I hope that you could attend the class regularly. I miss talking to you. Your enthusiasm makes our class very enjoyable. Keep on studying. Have a lovely day! wink

Teacher Angel angel

 

 

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