I live in the suburbs of a large city called Seoul which is capital city of Korea. It's fairly new residential city, so it's quite clean and quiet There are many apartment complexes in the area. What i like the most about my city is that I can take care of almost everything here. There are banks, discount stores, departement stores, movie theaters, and plenty of places to eat or drink in the central area. All citizen can easily go there by foot. There are many parks people can go to as well. It's quite easy to get around as we have subway and local buses. Parents like this city because there are good schools in the district. I like my neighborhood as there are a lot of forest i can jog or hike. I don't want to leave my area forever.

1.  I live in the suburbs of a large city called Seoul which is capital city of Korea.  GOOD JOB!

2.  It's fairly new residential city, so it's quite clean and quiet.   GOOD JOB!

3. There are many apartment complexes in the area. GOOD JOB!

4. What i like the most about my city is that I can take care of almost everything here. GOOD JOB!

5. There are banks, discount stores, departement stores, movie theaters, and plenty of places to eat or drink in the central area. GOOD JOB!

6. All citizen can easily go there by foot. GOOD JOB!

7. There are many parks people can go to as well.  -> There are many parks that people can go to as well.

8. It's quite easy to get around as we have subway and local buses. GOOD JOB!

9. Parents like this city because there are good schools in the district. GOOD JOB!

10. I like my neighborhood as there are a lot of forest i can jog or hike. -> I like my neighborhood as there are a lot of forests I can jog to or hike on.

11. I don't want to leave my area forever. GOOD JOB!

Hi Kent,

Good job! You were able to express your thoughts very well as you answer the questions regarding the topic. You have also less errors this time so keep up the good work! :-)

- Lovely