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제목 | Neighbor | 등록일 | 2014-12-09 |
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내용 | I want to tell you about my neighbor who are living downstairs of my old apartment. Last year, I was living in a very old apartment which was on the process of remodeling. One summer day, after a heavy rain, someone knocked my door and it was my neighbor. He asked me to go and check his home with him. When I opened the door, there were lots of buckets in his living room to store drained water from the ceiling. The apartment was so old that there were lots of leakages on the walls. If I were him, I would have been very angry about it. But he was very nice and calm so he just asked me to fix it. Fortunetly, it didn’t cost me a lot so I was very relieved. After this, I decided to buy new apartment and I am living there now. | ||
담당강사 | Wynston2 | 등록일 | 2014-12-09 |
첨삭 내용 | I want to tell you about my neighbor who
*** JOHN, VERY WELL UNDERSTOOD. YOU'LL NOTICE THAT I RESTRUCTURED SOME SENTENCES FOR EASY FLOW OF IDEAS AND GRAMMAR. I ALSO USED THE THESUARUS AND DICTIONARY TO APPLY NEW VOCABULARY TO GIVE THE PARAGRAPH ADDITIONAL VITALITY! WHEN WRITING, ALWAYS HAVE YOUR THESAURUS/DICTIONARY HANDY. - TEACHER WYNSTON |