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| 제목 | Lunch | 등록일 | 2014-03-10 |
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| 내용 | - with whom? I usually go with 4 to 6 colleagues during lunch time on weekday. I believe that it is importanto to have a meal with them for sharing some ideas about business. Through that experience, I've been able to communicate with others better. According to recent news report, it would be one of essential factors to increase the level of closeness within office. - when? The company limits lunch time from 11:30 to 12:30, so the officers have only 1 hour for it. That's why we go to restaurants around work place. |
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| 담당강사 | Mae | 등록일 | 2014-03-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | - with whom? I usually go with 4 to 6 colleagues during lunch time on weekday. -> I believe that it is important Through that experience, I've been able to communicate with other people better. According to recent news report, it would be one of essential factors to increase the level of closeness within the office. - when? The company has 1 hour break from 11:30 to 12:30, so the officers can only have 1 hour for it. That's why we go to restaurants around our work place.
Hello Ted, I really apperiate your effort on writing here. I also have one hour break too :) Thank you for sharing me this information. I admire you for always trying your best to answer in a complete sentence. That will help your English! Keep it up!
Teacher Mae.
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