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| 제목 | hobby | 등록일 | 2014-12-09 |
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| 내용 | hobby 12/09 hello good morning how are you? today is not same as usual and something happened to me which make me confused. my company was reorganized and many supervisor went out of company. there are some of supervisors who I have worked with together for several years. I'm sorry about that before it said to employee , there so many rumors and i think we might enjoy rumors and worry about our future. i figure i'm distracted for while. beacause my supervisor and some coworkers may be going to move other department or i might have to move other department. that's it. i wanna talk about hobby what is your hobby? my hobby is to make simple furniture or something for myself do you know DIY? in other words, do it yourself I like to do something myself and I'm interested in home interior, furniture and architecture. someday I wanna build my house in jeuju island do you know jeju island? I think it is one of famous and beautiful island in the world. if you have chance to visit our country, I recommend you to visit that jeuju island. anyway actually many men like making something but they don't be interested in home interior. |
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| 담당강사 | Emily2 | 등록일 | 2014-12-10 |
| 첨삭 내용 | hobby 12/09 Hello. Good morning. How are you? Today is not the same as usual. Something happened to me which confuses me. My department was reorganized and many supervisors left the company. There are some supervisors I worked with for several years. I figure I have been distracted for awhile. My supervisor and some coworkers may be moving to a different department or I might have to move to another department. I want to talk about hobbies. What is your hobby? My hobby is making simple furniture. Do you know DIY? In other words, do it yourself. I like to do things myself and I'm interested in home interior, furniture and architecture. Someday, I want to build my house in Jeuju Island do you know Jeuju Island? I think it is one of the most famous and beautiful islands in the world. If you have chance to visit our country, I recommend you visit Jeuju Island. Actually, many men like making things but they aren't interested in home interior. |
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