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제목 Complaint 등록일 2014-12-16
내용 As the world goes dry and indivisual and complicated, many complaints occur at many places.
I am not a complainer but I usually compaint about the treatment rather than the products.
I can't remember the memories about complaint, because many cases of the complaints come from instant heated emotion, I forget it easily. But I remember a good memory started from complaint, and ended up compliment.
Once I went to a restaurant for a blind date. During my eating pasta, I chewed a piece of bacon which was not unwrapped. I called a waiter and showed it to her. She said "I'll take the dish and check it with chef."
She came back in a moment, and proposed serving a new one.
I accepted her proposal. And after finishing the dish, when I came to the cashier, they didn't charged it to me. I was very satisfied and used to go there still from that day.
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2014-12-17
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As the world goes dry and individualistic and complicated, many complaints occur at many places. I am not a complainer but I usually complain about the treatment service rather than the products. I can't remember the memories about complaints I made. Because many cases of the complaints came from instant heated emotion, I forget it easily. But I remember a good memory started from complaint, and ended up as a compliment. Once I went to a restaurant for a blind date. During While I was eating pasta, I chewed a piece of bacon which that was not unwrapped. I called a waiter and showed it to her. She said "I'll take the dish and check it with the chef." She came back in a moment, and proposed serving a new one. I accepted her proposal. And after finishing the dish, when I came went to the cashier, they didn't charged it to me for it. I was very satisfied and still go there since that day. used to go there still from since that day.

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