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제목 | Self Introduction | 등록일 | 2015-01-05 |
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내용 | Nice to meet you. My name is Sang hun Im, and my english name is Clark. I Married last year, and I don't have any children yet. I work for Samsung SDS, and I have been working for 7 years. My job is Technical architect, so called TA. It's very interesting job. My hobby is watching movies. I like watching movies with my wife on weekend. We like independent movies which is not so famous. P.S This morning, I said ' I went Ever-land.' and you didn't know what it is. At that time, I didn't know the word 'amusement park'. Ever-land is the biggest amusement part in korea. :) |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2015-01-06 |
첨삭 내용 | Nice to meet you. My name is Sang hun Im, and my English name is Clark. I RECENTLY GOT married last year, and do not have any children. I work AS A TA (TECHNICAL ARCHITECT) for Samsung SDS, A COMPANY THAT SPECIALIZES IN ICT, AND HAVE BEEN EMPLOYED THERE P.S. DURING OUR DIALOGUE This morning I said THAT, 'I went TO Ever-land', and you didn't UNDERSTAND ME.
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