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제목 unit 33 please take me to this address 등록일 2015-01-05
내용 1. address
- my wife took me to high level in mental part during marriage life

2. express
- i don't like to use expresstrain because of expensive fee compared to bus

3. downtown
- there are a lot of merchandises to increae people's welfare in downdwon store

4. fastest
- the fastest land animal in the world is the cheetah

5. bit
- it is a little bit hot outside

6. dirve
- my wife would drive my son to his school whenever he got up late

7. thrill

- if some people can a lof of thing in short time, there will be occured lots of thrills

8. ride
- rideing the roller coaster usually makes people feel thrills
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2015-01-06
첨삭 내용

1. address - my wife took me to high level in mental part during marriage life (YOU DID NOT APPLY THE WORD, "ADDRESS" IN THIS SENTENCE)

2. express - i I don't like to use express trainS because of expensive feeS compared to bus FARES

3. downtown -Tthere are a lot of merchandises to increaSe people's welfare in downdwon store

4. fastest - The fastest land animal in the world is the cheetah

5. bit - It is a little bit hot outside

6. dirve - My wife would drive my son to his school whenever he got GETS up late

7. thrill - If some people can a lof of thing in short time, there will be occured lots of thrills (I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS STATEMENT)

8. ride - rideing RIDING the roller coasterS usually makes people feel thrills DOWN THEIR SPINE

 

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