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| 제목 | UNIT 3 JOB | 등록일 | 2015-01-06 |
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| 내용 | Hello, Yes I have a job I have worked in management a network system My main role is to check a system and setup a system and make a daily report to send many customers I really stiesfy my job because my company gives me many money and many welfare benefactions such as, free 10 movie tickets and health. |
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| 담당강사 | Richard2 | 등록일 | 2015-01-13 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello, Yes I have a job I have worked in the management of a network system. My main role is to check a system and set up a system and make a daily report to send to many customers. I am really satisfied with my job because my company gives me muchmoney and many welfare benefits such as |
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