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제목 Listening to Music_Writing_ v1 등록일 2015-01-08
내용 There are many singers in Korea. I feel that new talented singers are introduced to public in every single minute so that it is hard for me to follow up the name of singers, so I usually just listen to the music and don’t care who is a singer. If I listen to the same music randomly over and over again, then I look for the singer. In general I seem to like group singers rather than single singers since more than 2 people can make a beautiful harmony. I, unfortunately, don’t have any outstanding name of singer group in my mind.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2015-01-09
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There are many singers in Korea AND I feel that new talented singers are introduced to THE public in every single minute, so that it is hard for me to follow up ON the name of A PARTICULAR singer.  IT IS FOR THIS MAIN REASON so THAT I CHOOSE TO usually just listen to the music, AND  REALLY DON'T FOCUS ON THE and don’t care who is a singer. HOWEVER, MY ATTENTION IS DRAWN TO THE SINGER If I HEAR listen to the same music A SONG randomly over and over again.  DURING THOSE TIMES I BECOME CURIOUS OF WHO THE SINGER IS. then I look for the singer. In general I seem to like group singers rather than single singers since more than 2 people can APPEAR TO make a beautiful harmony. I, Unfortunately, I don’t have any outstanding name of A singer group in my mind.

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