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제목 Sorry about my absent!! 등록일 2015-01-12
내용 Hi
This is Choi.
First of all, I am sorry about the absent for our last Friday class.
At that time, I got very important time with my wife.
Nowdays, My wife is spending tough time. I don't know the reason exactly,
but I think it has been caused by me.
Therefor, I had to hlep her through some kind of counselling.
Last Friday, My wife and I visited leaders of our group that based on our church.
My wife and I had a precious time. Though We couldn't clear up, but We knew the reason about her tough time and also knew the method that to overcome the problem.
And Now, I am trying to think what to do for my wife and for our family.
Thank you for reading and I'm waiting your call tonight.
Bye..
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2015-01-12
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Hi This is Choi. First of all, I am sorry about the absent for our last Friday class. At that time, I got very important time with my wife. Nowdays, My wife is spending tough time. I don't know the reason exactly, but I think it has been caused by me. Therefor, I had to hlep her through some kind of counselling. Last Friday, My wife and I visited leaders of our group that based on our church. My wife and I had a precious time. Though We couldn't clear up, but We knew the reason about her tough time and also knew the method that to overcome the problem. And Now, I am trying to think what to do for my wife and for our family. Thank you for reading and I'm waiting your call tonight. Bye..

 

Thanks for your advance notification Choi.  I did not see this message until after class.  

Also, I appreciate your sharing of such private details about your private life. My primary professional background is in Counseling Psychology, and while I do not use this forum to evaluate, assess or counsel students, I want you to know that I totally empathize and understand what it is that you are going through.   As you are seeking the right professional services, I am confident that over time, things will work out for the better, for the both of you.  Teacher Wynston  

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