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제목 My Mom 등록일 2015-01-15
내용 Hi Emily

It was same as usal. I think everyday is same day.
One day seems long to me but a week passes fast and one month passes faster.

I can't think time go away so fast.

I've been married for ten years , my son becomes 11 years old boy and I'm at middle of 40.
Yesterday I went to my mom's house in Daejon. It take 2 hours to go by car.
It was two month since I saw my mom. She is getting older and weaker.

When I was young boy, I was afraid of her because my mom was very strict with us.
But nowadays she just looks like a little and old woman.
It makes me unhappy.

2 weeks ago, She fell over while she was taking walk in play ground of element school near her house and her left arms's broken. My mom was nonetheless cooking foods for me.

My mom's cook is the most delicious to me in the world.
So I eat too much and I had to have medicine for digestion.

My father-in-law got Alzheimer’s disease a few month ago and last month he had to go care center.

Last Sunday, he went to the hospital by emblunce. his temperature was three degrees above normal.
Doctor said that's beacause Alzheimer’s disease made his ablitity to swallow food.
and Some food went to his lung and it made his temperature higer than normal.

He is still at the hospital.

I know Men has to get old and die some day.
Today I can't help stop thinking death and life.
담당강사 Emily2 등록일 2015-01-20
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Hi Emily,

I'm the same as usal. I think everyday is the same day. One day seems like a long time but weeks and months seem to past by quicly. Time slips by so quickly. I'm in my mid forties and I've been married for ten years and my son is about to turn eleven. It took me two hours to drive to my mom's house in Daejong yesterday. I hadn't seen my mom in two months.  She is getting older and weaker. When I was young I was afraid of my mom because she was very strict. But nowadays, she just looks like a little old woman. It makes me unhappy. Two weeks ago she fell while walking through an elementary school playground near her house. Nonetheless, my mom cooked for me. I think my mom's cooking is the best in the world.  So I ate too much and I had to take medicine for my digestion. My father-in-law was diagnosed with Alzheimer’s a few month ago, and last month he had to go care center. Last Sunday, he was taken to the hospital by an ambulance. His temperature was three degrees higher than normal. The doctor said it's beacause Alzheimer’s disease interferes with the ability to swallow and some food went into his lung and it increaded his temperature higer than normal. He is still at the hospital. I know men have to get old and die someday. Today I can't help stop thinking about death and life.

 













 

 

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