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제목 Hi Monica 등록일 2015-01-20
내용 Did you have a good weekend?
Last Sunday I took a OPIC exam, but I think I was not good at answering the questions.
To be fair, I wanted to say a lot to each questions but it was not easy to answer fuently.
After the exam , I made my mind to study more and focus on this class.
To get a AL score in OPIC is my new year's resoltion.
I have a lot of things to enjoy my life. Reading more books, Learing a new sport.
But my priorty in this year is to get AL and speak English fluently.
Thanks. See you at night.
담당강사 Monica 등록일 2015-01-20
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[c o r r e c t i o n]

Did you have a good weekend? -ok!

Last Sunday I took a OPIC exam, but I think I was not good at answering the questions.

-> Last Sunday I took a the OPIC exam, but I think I was not good at answering the questions.

To be fair, really wanted to say a lot to each questions but it was not easy to answer fuently.

-> To be fair, I wanted to say a lot to each questions but it was not easy to answer spontaneously  fuently.

After the exam , I made my mind to study more and focus on this class.

-> After the exam , I made up my mind to study harder  more and focus more on this class.

To get a AL score in OPIC is my new year's resoltion.

-> To get an AL score in OPIC is my New Year's resolution.

I have a lot of things to enjoy my life. Reading more books, Learing a new sport.

-> I have a lot of things to enjoy in my life like reading more books and learing a new sports.

But my priorty in this year is to get AL and speak English fluently.

-> But my priorty in this year is to get AL and to speak English fluently.

Thanks. -ok!

See you at night.

-> See you at this night.

 

[c o m m e n t]

Hi HJ! Thanks for sharing your weekend activity. Actually, I attend a birthday party last Sunday. It was so fun but tiring at the same time. Anyway, I want to congratulate you on taking the Opic test last week. I know it was a tough one but I believe in you. :) Don't worry, I will try my best to help you out! Let us make your resolution come true!

-T. Monica

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