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제목 | Hi Monica | 등록일 | 2015-01-20 |
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내용 | Did you have a good weekend? Last Sunday I took a OPIC exam, but I think I was not good at answering the questions. To be fair, I wanted to say a lot to each questions but it was not easy to answer fuently. After the exam , I made my mind to study more and focus on this class. To get a AL score in OPIC is my new year's resoltion. I have a lot of things to enjoy my life. Reading more books, Learing a new sport. But my priorty in this year is to get AL and speak English fluently. Thanks. See you at night. |
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담당강사 | Monica | 등록일 | 2015-01-20 |
첨삭 내용 | [c o r r e c t i o n] Did you have a good weekend? -ok! Last Sunday I took a OPIC exam, but I think I was not good at answering the questions. -> Last Sunday I took
-> After the exam , I made my mind to study more and focus on this class. -> After the exam , I made up my mind to study harder To get a AL score in OPIC is my new year's resoltion. -> To get an AL score in OPIC is my New Year's resolution. I have a lot of things to enjoy my life. Reading more books, Learing a new sport. -> I have a lot of things to enjoy in my life like reading more books and learing But my priorty in this year is to get AL and speak English fluently. -> But my priorty Thanks. See you at night. -> See you
[c o m m e n t] Hi HJ! Thanks for sharing your weekend activity. Actually, I attend a birthday party last Sunday. It was so fun but tiring at the same time. Anyway, I want to congratulate you on taking the Opic test last week. I know it was a tough one but I believe in you. :) Don't worry, I will try my best to help you out! Let us make your resolution come true! -T. Monica |