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제목 My weekend 등록일 2014-03-14
내용 My weekend

i usually rest my home on weekends.
because i dislike go outdoor due to tired.
there is notihing like a good sleep to relieve the stress.
but sometimes i used to shopping center for my wife
there is notihing like a shopping and talking to relieve the my wife stress.
my wife likes small-talk to me about coworkers
problem is a long time..
wife is a energizer ( energizer battery made by energizer company. energizer battery have a long life)
when i am shopping and small-talk with my wife i am too much like hard work. Hmm....
So when i stay at home on weekends, i am avoiding my wife at home..

i will go my home-town on this weekends with my wife. because perform ancestral rites to grandmother
it take almost 3 hour at home-town.





if i dont go shopping center. i should be walk on eggshells around my wife.
담당강사 Simon 등록일 2014-05-12
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My weekend...

I usually rest my home on weekends because i dislike go outdoor due to tired.

→ I usually rest my home take a rest on weekends because I dislike  go outdoor due to going out because I was tired.

there is notihing like a good sleep to relieve the stress.

→ There is nothing like a good sleep to relieve the stress.

but sometimes i used to shopping center for my wife there is notihing like a shopping and talking to relieve the my wife stress.

→ but sometimes I used to go to the shopping center for with my wife there is notihing like a shopping and talking talk about anything to relieve the my wife's stress.

my wife likes small-talk to me about coworkers problem is a long time.

→ My wife likes wants to have a small-talk to me about her coworker's problem is in a long time.

wife is a energizer ( energizer battery made by energizer company. energizer battery have a long life) when i am shopping and small-talk with my wife i am too much like hard work. 

→ My wife is so energetic ( energizer battery made by energizer company. energizer battery have a long life ) energitic is someone having or involving a lot of energy ) because when I go shopping with my wife I'm losing my energy.

Hmm.... So when i stay at home on weekends, i am avoiding my wife at home..

Hmm, So when I stay at home on weekends, I am avoiding tried not to talk too much with my wife at home.

i will go my home-town on this weekends with my wife. 

→ I will go to my hometown on with my wife this weekends.

because perform ancestral rites to grandmother it take almost 3 hour at home-town.

→ because perform ancestral rites to we will commemorate the death of my grandmother. It takes almost 3 hours at to go to my home town.

if i dont go shopping center. i should be walk on eggshells around my wife.

→ If I don't go to a shopping center, I should be walk on eggshells around my wife.

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Re-typed with Corrections:

I usually take a rest on weekends. I dislike going out because I was tired.

There is nothing like a good sleep to relieve the stress but sometimes I used to go to the shopping center with my wife and talk about anything to relieve my wife's stress.

My wife wants to have a small-talk about her coworker's problem in a long time.

My wife is so energetic ( energitic is someone having or involving a lot of energy ) because when I go shopping with my wife I'm losing my energy.

Hmm, So when I stay at home on weekends, I tried not to talk too much with my wife.

I will go to my hometown with my wife this weekends because we will commemorate the death of my grandmother. It takes almost 3 hours to go to my home town.

If I don't go to a shopping center, I should walk on eggshells around my wife.

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Comment:

Wow, you have a wonderful plan for your weekend. Because you're planning to go out with your wife. That is one way of having a good communication in a relationship. Enjoy your weekend. Stay safe always wink

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