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제목 | My weekend | 등록일 | 2014-03-14 |
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내용 | My weekend i usually rest my home on weekends. because i dislike go outdoor due to tired. there is notihing like a good sleep to relieve the stress. but sometimes i used to shopping center for my wife there is notihing like a shopping and talking to relieve the my wife stress. my wife likes small-talk to me about coworkers problem is a long time.. wife is a energizer ( energizer battery made by energizer company. energizer battery have a long life) when i am shopping and small-talk with my wife i am too much like hard work. Hmm.... So when i stay at home on weekends, i am avoiding my wife at home.. i will go my home-town on this weekends with my wife. because perform ancestral rites to grandmother it take almost 3 hour at home-town. if i dont go shopping center. i should be walk on eggshells around my wife. |
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담당강사 | Simon | 등록일 | 2014-05-12 |
첨삭 내용 | My weekend... I usually rest my home on weekends because i dislike go outdoor due to tired. → I usually there is notihing like a good sleep to relieve the stress. → There is nothing like a good sleep to relieve the stress. but sometimes i used to shopping center for my wife there is notihing like a shopping and talking to relieve the my wife stress. → but sometimes I used to go to the shopping center my wife likes small-talk to me about coworkers problem is a long time. → My wife wife is a energizer ( energizer battery made by energizer company. energizer battery have a long life) when i am shopping and small-talk with my wife i am too much like hard work. → My wife is so energetic ( Hmm.... So when i stay at home on weekends, i am avoiding my wife at home.. →Hmm, So when I stay at home on weekends, I i will go my home-town on this weekends with my wife. → I will go to my hometown because perform ancestral rites to grandmother it take almost 3 hour at home-town. → because if i dont go shopping center. i should be walk on eggshells around my wife. → If I don't go to a shopping center, I should ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Re-typed with Corrections: I usually take a rest on weekends. I dislike going out because I was tired. There is nothing like a good sleep to relieve the stress but sometimes I used to go to the shopping center with my wife and talk about anything to relieve my wife's stress. My wife wants to have a small-talk about her coworker's problem in a long time. My wife is so energetic ( energitic is someone having or involving a lot of energy ) because when I go shopping with my wife I'm losing my energy. Hmm, So when I stay at home on weekends, I tried not to talk too much with my wife. I will go to my hometown with my wife this weekend If I don't go to a shopping center, I should walk on eggshells around my wife. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Comment: Wow, you have a wonderful plan for your weekend. Because you're planning to go out with your wife. That is one way of having a good communication in a relationship. Enjoy your weekend. Stay safe always |