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제목 | My company | 등록일 | 2015-02-05 |
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내용 | I’m working at Samsung SDS which is the best IT company in Korea. It is located in Jamsil where the street is always crowded with people. My company is known for many kinds of IT services. We always deliver high-quality products on time, and we have outstanding management skill of software, So our clients are very satisfied with the service we provide. My office is busy and noisy since we have a lot of work to do. there are several facilities in my company, cafeteria, fitness center, health care room and so on. Especially I really like cafeteria. Because there are various food section So I can have many choice depending on my feeling. This is all about my company. Thank you. |
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담당강사 | Abby | 등록일 | 2015-02-06 |
첨삭 내용 | I’m working at Samsung SDS which is the best IT company in Korea. It is located in Jamsil where the street is always crowded with people. My company is known for many kinds of IT services. We always deliver high-quality products on time, and we have outstanding management skill of software, So our clients are very satisfied with the service we provide. My office is busy and noisy since we have a lot of work to do. There are several facilities in my company, cafeteria, fitness center, health care room and so on. I really like cafeteria yhe most because there are various food sections. So I can have many choices depending on my feeling. This is all about my company. Thank you. ___________________________________________________________ Hi Takyeong, It's nice to read this! I think you r company is really a big one. Enjoy your day!
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