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| 제목 | eat out dinner | 등록일 | 2015-02-06 |
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| 내용 | I'm eating out dinner with my family. It's friday. I had to wait for 40 minutes. because there're a lot of people. I went to the restaurant after work. I had to excercised at lunch time. but I think I excercised too much. So I was sleepy and tired in all of the afternoon. next time I won't excercised at lunch time. today dinner is shabu-shabi? Do you know it? Have you ever eaten shabu-shabu? shabu-shabu is a japanese dish. you eat thinly sliced beef boiled in water. |
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| 담당강사 | Emily2 | 등록일 | 2015-02-09 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I ate dinner out with my family. It's Friday. I had to wait for 40 minutes because there were a lot of people. I went to the restaurant after work. I exercised during lunch time but I think I excercised too much. I was sleepy and tired all afternoon. Next time I won't excercise during lunch time. Today's dinner is shabu-shabi. Do you know it? Have you ever eaten shabu-shabu? Shabu-shabu is a Japanese dish. It is thinly sliced beef boiled in water. |
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