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제목 How about this? 등록일 2015-02-13
내용 Hello. Jasmine.
Can you give advices for the below contexts?
Now, Our company is running a contest for new slogan.
Here's my ideas. Please correct the sentences and choose the best one.

Eyes for the future
Eyes for your value
Eyes for(on?) your inspiration
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2015-02-15
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Eyes for the future
Eyes for your value
Eyes on your inspiration

I like #1 and #3.
"Eyes FOR the future" and "Eyes FOR your inspiration" would mean your company is providing eyes (vision/imagination) for the future or for someone's inspiration. "Eyes ON your inspiration" would be telling the customer to focus on his inspiration.

We have an English expression "Eyes on the ball". It comes from sports, but it means "focus on your goal". So I guess "Eyes for the future" and "Eyes for your inspiration" are my favorite because it's like you're helping your clients and you're focused on their goals/future.

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