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제목 Asking for correction for my writing 등록일 2015-02-24
내용 Below contexts are my writings yesterday.
I hope that all of these writings are more polished.
And also ↑← include asking itself.

1. If my contexts are not natural or nice enough, I think it would be better you interrupt me anytime, and rephrase it rightly. Of caurse you already do it to me, even by text after our class,
But I feel that the correction on the right time makes me memorize it better.
2. When you correct me, It would be nice if you speak slowly and clearly. I don't understand your speach enoughly as you think. ^^; I am still foreigner, and I am a baby in english. ^^
I hope you treat me as a baby at least when I speak something~
So, if you repeat every syllables slowly and clearly, I could recall it while I am walking to work.
3. At some minutes before finishing our talking of the day, If you summarize some important contexts or conrrections of my speach of the day, I think it also help me out to memorize while I am walking.
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2015-02-25
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The content below is my writing from yesterday
I hope that all of this writing can be more polished
And also includes the question itself

1. If my speech isn't natural enough, I think it would be better you interrupt me anytime, and rephrase it right. Of course you already do it for (it has a purpose, so "for") me, even written after our class, but I feel that immediate corrections make me memorize it better.
2. When you correct me, it would be nice if you speak slowly and clearly. I don't understand your speech as thoroughly as you think. ^^; I'm still a foreigner, and I'm a baby in English. ^^
I hope you treat me as a baby at least when I say something~
So, if you repeat every syllable slowly and clearly, I can recall it while I am walking to work.
3. A few minutes before finishing our talking for the day, if you summarize some important conrrections for the day, I think it'll also help me memorize it while I am walking.

 

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