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제목 Walking to work 등록일 2015-03-03
내용 I park my car thirty minutes distance from company. So, After finishing our class, I have to walk to work for thirty minutes. Due to the lack of time of exercising, I am very thanksful for my walking time. And as I am walking, I feel the power of legs, and I feel my legs get strong.
담당강사 Jennifer1 등록일 2015-03-13
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My car is parked thirty minutes from my job.  So, after finishing our class, I have to walk thirty minutes to work.  Due to my busy schedule, I don't have much time to exercise.  I am very thankful for this walking time.  As I am walking, I can feel my legs getting stronger. 

 

 

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