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제목 upset and fighting 등록일 2015-03-19
내용 I bought an apartment last month. I like the town due to the traffic convenience and beautiful scenery.
I often visit a real estate website which is the biggest website among that kind of website in Korea.
Yesterday, I read an article that somebody said that the town is strongly assumed that the air is polluted by the find dust.
But that is not true. Because I have been lived in this region more than forty years.
I argued by replying to the article to keep the value of my apartment safe.
담당강사 Jennifer1 등록일 2015-03-23
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I bought an apartment last month. I like the town due to the traffic convenience and beautiful scenery. I often visit the largest and most popular real estate website in Korea. Yesterday, I read an article that somebody said, "that the town is strongly assumed that the air is polluted by the find dust". This statment is not true because I have been living in this region for more than forty years and this is not an air-polluted area. I replied to the article about their untrue findings. I want people to know that this area is safe and community is valued by those who live here.  

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