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제목 | Hello Patrick! This is Choi! | 등록일 | 2015-03-20 |
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내용 | Maybe If you don't know who am I, because you have many students. Please remember that we had a long time class 25 mins at 10 pm(KT) last few weeks. That was going on two class continuously. Ye! It's me Choi. I'm Very Thank you for your listening in spite of my poor English. You are GREAT TEACHER and You are good friend to me. Oh! Today is last time for our class. I'm so sad I can't hear your voice anymore!! I know that you are going to Japan with your girl friend. Great!! and we will more close when you are in Japan. Oh I Got A Big Plan. The next year 2016 My family will visite Japan with my parents. I strongly want to meet you if you are in Japan on that day. Also I want to keep in touch with you from time to time. If you courteously and carefully OK, Please tell me your E-MAIL address. Thank you very much and meet at 10pm..... Bye Your Studennt Choi... |
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담당강사 | Patrick2 | 등록일 | 2015-03-20 |
첨삭 내용 | Maybe if you don't know who am I, because you have many students, please remember that we had a long class of 25 mins at 10 pm(KT) these last few weeks. Our class was two classes going on continuously. Ye! It's me Choi. I'm very thankful to you for you listening to me in spite of my poor English. You are a GREAT TEACHER and you are a good friend to me. Oh! Today is our last class. I'm so sad I can't hear your voice anymore!! I know that you are going to Japan with your girl friend. Great!! and we will be closer when you are in Japan. Oh I got a big plan. Next year in 2016, my family will visit Japan with my parents. I really want to meet you if you are in Japan on that day. Also I want to keep in touch with you from time to time. If it's ok with you, please tell me your E-MAIL address. Thank you very much and I'll meet you at 10pm..... Bye Your Studennt Choi... Choi, thank you for this wonderful message! You are a very kind person and I feel sad that I am leaving this company. I hope to have more students like you in the future. Thank you so much! Also, your English is not bad at all. Sometimes you make a few mistakes, but it's easy to uderstand. Keep up your great effort! My email is patsenglishhelp@gmail.com |