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내용 It is script about traditional holidays. Please modify :-)

In Korea There are two big traditional holidays.
Among them I will introduce Seol-Nal. It is similar to New years day.
In Seol-Nal All families get together. Also we visit ancestor's grave.
Seeing full-moon we pray peace for each other.
Usually in seol-nal most people play traditional called Yut.
It use 4 wood-sticks. Each person has horses. as conclusion of through 4 wood-sticks,
they can move horses.
Also we eat korean traditional food Dduk-kook.
I think it is big bless having traditional holidays.
담당강사 Madeline1 등록일 2015-03-30
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  1. It is script about traditional holidays. Please modify :-) In Korea There are two big traditional holidays. Among them I will introduce Seol-Nal. It is similar to New years day. In Seol-Nal All families get together. We also  visit our  ancestor's graves. We look at the full moon and  pray for peace for each other. Usually in seol-nal most people play a traditional game called Yut. 4 woodem sticks are needed to play the game. (Each person has horses. as conclusion of through 4 wood-sticks, they can move horses.)  -- Not sure what the scentences in parenthsis mean? ) Also we eat korean traditional food Dduk-kook. I think traditional holidays are a real blessing.

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