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제목 Shopping 등록일 2015-04-13
내용 Ok, I'd like tell you about my shopping place.
My favorite shopping place is Myeong-Dong. There are many clothing and accessory stroes.
Not only they are trendly but also inexpensive.
I go shopping once a month with my brother. On the last weekend of the month, we go to
Myeong-Dong together. We try clothes on and tell each other whether they look good on us or not.
Since there are many restaurant that serve delicious food, we always have a nice dinner after shopping. It's a great place to shop, so I recommend you go there, too.
That's all.
담당강사 Mean2 등록일 2015-04-14
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Ok, I'd like tell you about my shopping place. My favorite shopping place is Myeong-Dong. There are many clothing and accessory accesories stroes  store. Not only they are it's trendy trendly but also inexpensive. I go shopping once a month with my brother. On the  Last weekend of the month, we go went to Myeong-Dong together. We try tried some clothes on and tell each other whether they look good on us or not. Since there are many restaurant that serve delicious food, we always have a nice dinner after shopping. It's a great place to shop, so I recommend you to go there, too. That's all.

 

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