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제목 hello angela 등록일 2014-04-01
내용 Dear Angela,

I am sorry that telephone call is cut.
My office was very noisy.
and I was not able to understand your voice well.
I look for a quiet place from tomorrow and talk on the telephone.

Thank you

Neo.
담당강사 Angela 등록일 2014-04-10
첨삭 내용

Hello Neo!

Thanks for informing me.I understand the situation.Anyway,I noticed that you made good sentences here in your message but there are just some corrections.Good Job!

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Dear Angela,

I am sorry that telephone call is cut.  (I'm sorry that the telephone call was cut.)
My office was very noisy.(Good sentence !)
and I was not able to understand your voice well. ( You can also say like :My office was very noisy and I wasn't able to understand your voice well.)
I look for a quiet place from tomorrow and talk on the telephone.(I will  look for a quiet place tomorrow and will talk to you on the telephone.)

Thank you

Neo.

 

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