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| 제목 | 1 April | 등록일 | 2014-04-01 |
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| 내용 | Hi teacher. I'd like to introduce myself to you. My Korean name is Kwag Dong Hoon and English name is Ryan. I've been working as IT engineer in Samsung SDS for 8 years. I worked in several small IT company before I came to Samsung SDS. As many people knows, my compnay is a leader of IT industry in Korea. There are about 14,000 employees over the world. |
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| 담당강사 | Cecile1 | 등록일 | 2014-04-02 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hi teacher. I'd like to introduce myself to you. My Korean name is Kwag Dong Hoon and my English name is Ryan. I've been working as an IT engineer in Samsung SDS for 8 years. I worked in several small IT company before I came to Samsung SDS. As many people knows, my
Hi Ryan, I heard a lot about your company and I think you are right. Samsung is a well known company not only in your country but in other countries as well. Just keep going and do your job well to impress your boss ^^. Thanks for sharing some information about you and your job. Have a great day! Cecile ^_^ |
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