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제목 Using positive attitude 등록일 2015-04-20
내용 We need to have a positive attitude whenever we feel depressed from a gloomy situation.
Making a good friend can help us to feel better.
담당강사 Wynston2 등록일 2015-04-20
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We need to have a positive attitude whenever we feel depressed from a gloomy situation. Making a good friend can help us to feel better.

 

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