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제목 How are you? 등록일 2015-05-05
내용 Hello? Miss Kat

I'm working in my office today.

How about you today?

When I go to work in the everymorning,
I listen to EBS english radio program to speaking english well in the bus.

If i go to trip with my family, I want to experience a language and culture of another country
So I need to speaking english well though your help.

Also, sometime I need to speaking english when Customer of over sea visited in our company.
I enjoy that I learn to how to speaking english.

I can't write more to work.
and I'm going to leave work at 5 pm to prepare dinner for my two daughers.

See you today lesson!!
담당강사 Kat 등록일 2015-05-05
첨삭 내용

Hello? Miss Kat

> Hello? Miss Kat, 

I'm working in my office today.

> I'm working in my office today. - Good Sentence 

How about you today?

> How about you today? - Good Sentence 

When I go to work in the everymorning, I listen to EBS english radio program to speaking english well in the bus.

> When I go to work in the every morning, I listen to EBS English radio program while I'm on the bus to speaking eEnglish well. in the bus.

If i go to trip with my family, I want to experience a language and culture of another country.

> If i I go on a to trip with my family, I want to experience a new language and culture of another country.

So I need to speaking english well though your help.

> So, I need your help to speaking eEnglish well. though your help.

Also, sometime I need to speaking english when Customer of over sea visited in our company.

> Also, sometimes I need to speaking eEnglish when Ccustomers of from over sea other countries visited in our company. 

I enjoy that I learn to how to speaking english.

> I enjoy that I learning to how to speaking eEnglish. 

I can't write more to work.

> I can't write more to when I'm at work. 

and I'm going to leave work at 5 pm to prepare dinner for my two daughers.

> and I'm going to leave work at 5 pm to prepare dinner for my two daughers. - Good Sentence 

See you today lesson!!

> See you on today's class lesson!!

 

Hello Clara,

Thank you for writing me a letter. I'm very happy to read your letter because you are very eager to learn English. I will help you improve your English in any means possible. See you next class. Have a good night. :)

 

♥ Teacher Kat ♥

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