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제목 | Reading newspaper #1 | 등록일 | 2015-05-07 |
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내용 | I try to read newspapers 15min in the morning almost everyday to keep up with the latest news. Read mainly on social issues, sports and travel information. Thanks to newspaper, I am always good topics and ideas when talking to colleagues. |
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담당강사 | Anne | 등록일 | 2015-05-07 |
첨삭 내용 | I try to read newspapers 15min in the morning almost everyday to keep up with the latest news. -> I try to read newspapers every morning for 15 minutes to keep me updated in the latest news. Read mainly on social issues, sports and travel information. -> I only read mainly on social issues, sports and travel information. Thanks to newspaper, I am always good topics and ideas when talking to colleagues. -> Thanks to the newspaper because I always have good topics and ideas when I talk with my colleagues. Hi Jeff, It was a good composition. You were tryong your best in making these sentences. Keep up the good work but remember to use the proper grammar. Anyway, have a good day ahead! ^^, ~Teacher Anne :) |