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제목 Good morning Cee 등록일 2014-04-03
내용 Hey Good morning
yesterday, I had a date with a new guy my friend introduced to me
so didn't notice your call.

Before I give it away, I want you to understand that
I'll write down here like an online chatting..
so don't want to consider literal grammar..
because I think it loosens focus on the right-away writing(or speaking) in English.
just want to focus on how to say in English with a correct conversational grammar in a proper speed.
and if you are pleased, please don't hesitate recommend the another words to write instead of the word that I shot.

yesterday, I listened to TED lecture
and the title was your bodylanguage shapes who you are .
I checked out some words that I want to remmember and speak later.
here are the things :

1. no-tech lifehack

I really like the word, life hack.
I've searched the meaning of the word, and the dictionary says,
"productivity trick, shorcut, novelty that makes life more comfortable and easier"
I hope I can find a numerous life hack :D .. it would be much happier, isn't it?

and I learned the word, novelty, and there was another good example to use it in the dictionary.
"It was fun working there at first, but the novelty soon wore off"

2. Before I give it away, I want ask you to do a little audit of your body.

I think the phrase "before I give it away" as useful. you can see I used it in front of this page. ;)
and "do a little audit of something" also could be useful.
it means observing or watching something carefully, isn't it?
"do a little audit of something" seems more sophisticated way to say .

3. if you learn to tweak this a little bit, it would significantly change the way your life unfolds.

I used "change" a lot when I'm speaking in English, and learned "tweak" could be another word.
repeating same words would be boring, so I'll mix "tweak" to say "change" from now on.
and it feels like "tweak" seems more like, small change or some kind of reason to changes.
is it right?

and because I like to think or say about "life" , it was easier to capture the words "life unfolds".
I like the way the speaker says about it : the way your life unfolds.
how great the expressions are.
I was surprised that I didn't even think about say like that. "life unfolds"
the same thing is in Korean. exactly same meaning.

hehe recently, I had a little bit of free time spending in the office.
so it would be good chance to study or practice the English more.

Take care, Cee
and can't wait to see you this night,

from Joey.
담당강사 Cee 등록일 2014-04-04
첨삭 내용

Hey, Good morning!   Yesterday, I had a date with a new guy my friend introduced to me so didn't notice your call. Before I give it away, I want you to understand that what I'm write down here is like an online chatting.  So I don't want to consider this as written in literal grammar because I think it loses focus in writing on the spot of  impromptu speaking in  English.  I just want to focus on how to say what I want to say in English with a correct conversational grammar in a right pacing. And if you are pleased,  please don't hesitate recommend the appropriate words to write instead of my choise of words. yesterday, I listened to TED lecture and the title was "your body language shapes who you are". I checked out some words that I want to remember and speak later.   Here are the things : 1. no-tech lifehack I really like the word, life hack. I've searched the meaning of the word, and the dictionary says, "productivity trick, shorcut, novelty that makes life more comfortable and easier" I hope I can find a numerous life hack :D .  It would be much happier, wouldn't it?.   The word "novelty" which I learned  is another  another good example to use. "It was fun working there at first, but the novelty soon wore off" 2. Before I give it away, I want ask you to do a little audit of your body. I think the phrase "before I give it away" as useful. you can see I used it in front of this page. ;) and "do a little audit of something" also could be useful. it means observing or watching something carefully, isn't it? "do a little audit of something" seems more sophisticated way to say it. 3. if you learn to tweak this a little bit, it would significantly change the way your life unfolds. I used "change" a lot when I'm speaking in English, and learned "tweak" could be another word.  Repeating same words could be boring, so I'll mix "tweak" to say "change" from now on. and it feels like "tweak" seems more like, small change or some kind of reason to changes. is it right? and because I like to think or say about "life" , it was easier to capture the words "life unfolds". I like the way the speaker  talked about it : the way your life unfolds. how great the expressions are. I was surprised that I couldnlt imagine saying such words and expressions. "life unfolds" the same thing is in Korean. exactly same meaning. hehe recently, I had a little bit of free time spending in the office. So it was really a good chance to study or practice the English more. Take care, Cee and can't wait to talk to you tonight, from Joey.

Thanks Joey.  Have an enchanting night.  Cee

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