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| 제목 | Hello Jasmine | 등록일 | 2014-04-03 |
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| 내용 | If you are ok,I would like to write anything related to my routine as much as possible. So, for the start up, Today I just kept working in power plant for fixing troubles. In addition, I attended a meeting, called "control system modification" in order to enhance effiency. I guess it is quite good enough for start-up..^^ Thanks, Hoyoung Kim, |
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| 담당강사 | Jasmine1 | 등록일 | 2014-04-04 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Today I just kept working in the power plant fixing problems. In addition, I attended a meeting, called "control system modification" in order to enhance effiency. I guess it is good enough for start-up..^^ Thanks, Hoyoung Kim,
It's absolutely enough! I love getting messages from people. It keeps me busy. I can always offer you writing topics if you can't think of anything to write about. Have a great weekend! -Jasmine :) |
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