Hello Neo ,

Thanks for information :)You were such a good student.Well I've read the message and you made it well.Just work on some correction's :)

Let's check this for a bit alright ? :)

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 My name is Lee Kwangseok. I am 42 yerars old.(I am 42 years old.)

I live in Yong-In city. Where is a residential area. (I live in Yong-In city which is a residential area.)

I am married.(I am  already married.)

I have fathered two wonderful children. (I am a father of two wonderful children.)

My wife beautiful and graceful. (My wife is beautiful and graceful )

 She is likes cooking. (She likes cooking )

She was always cooking for us.( She always cooks for us)

She take care of children and the house work.(She takes care of my children and does the household chores .)

My daughter is 9 years old. She goes to elemantary school. She is pretty and shy. My son is 5 years old. He goes to kindergarten. (Good Job!Good sentence ! :))

He is energetic and he is like outside activities (He is energetic and he likes outdoor activities)

I started to work in Samsung SDS since 2000, For 14 years. ( I started to work in Samsung SDS in 2000 .Thus,I've been working for 14 years)

I think I work really hard but I enjoy my job. My job is in sales. I am salesman. I graduated from Kangnam university. My major is mechanical enginering. (I am a saleman)

I am outgoing and like to meet new peolpe.(I am an outgoing person and I like to meet new people.)

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Reminder,we have to add -s on the verb whenever the subject starts with "he,she and it " for example ,He likes to cook or she likes cooking.

-Teacher Angela