영작교정

수강기간 중 영어로 일기 또는 자유로운 글을 작성해 주세요.
담당 강사가 직접 교정을 해 드립니다.

제목 Differences between Team Reaction and Team Building 등록일 2014-04-08
내용 Team Reaction is the activity that team members get along doing non-working plays, such as workshops, watching movies, drinkings. It is temporary event and focuses on the entertainment. Throughout the activities, team members can share their thoughts or experiences, and they become friendly.

Team Building is every activity that include selecting team members, co-working, making system for team cooperations, assesing the contribution of each member. So, Team Building is continuous activity and it is more focusing on the working and achievements. It is wider concept.

Team Reaction is sort of Team Building activities.
In my personal view, team reaction activities don't seem to be helpful to the performances directly.
But, Team Building is very important for managing the team's chemical structure, and it makes large effect on the performance of the organization.
담당강사 Jasmine1 등록일 2014-04-10
첨삭 내용

Team Recreation is the an activity that  in which team members get along doing non-working plays games, such as workshops, watching movies, or drinkings. It is a temporary event and focuses on the entertainment. Throughout the activities, team members can share their thoughts or experiences, and they become friendly.

Team Building is every activity that includes (-S) selecting team members, co-working, making systems (pl) for team cooperations, or assesing the contribution of each member. So, Team Building is a continuous activity and it is more focused on the working and achievements. It is a wider concept.

Team Recreation is a sort of Team Building activity. (sing)

In my personal view, team recreation activities don't seem to be helpful to for the performances directly. But, Team Building is very important for managing the team's chemical structure, and it makes has a large effect on the performance of the organization.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

The word is "team recreation" not "team reaction". The articles seem to be a little difficult. Every singular sentence needs articles.

As for the word focusing. We have participle adjectives in English. Some adjectives are formed using the participle form of a word.

Past participle is the 3rd verb form: see, saw, seen; confuse, confused, confused; Most often the 2nd (past) and 3rd form will be the same.

--> I'm bored. I'm confused. I'm interested in politics. Team building is focused on building relationships.

The present participle (-ing form) is used to form adjectives that CAUSE a feeling.

--> This TV show is boring. Participle adjectives are confusing. This book I'm reading is interesting. The focusing tiger planned on attacking the elk.

Please let me know if this is too confusing. It's a wide concept to explain briefly online. Great job on this homework!

목록